Anonymous asked:
Great speech. Just some advice if you'd like it. To make sure it's a speech rather than an essay that's being read aloud, you should throw in some rhetorical questions. Trust me, your teachers will love it because it makes the audience ponder and think about what you're talking about. It shows a sense of connection between you and the audience. I loved the speech though, it's really good :)

AHAH GOD I KNOW. thank god it’s only a draft, the teacher will make some corrections for me so i’m happy with what i have so far :D thank you for the advice! :D